Cinder The Scarred

Subject: Cinder The Scarred Wed Sep 04, 2013 6:02 pm

The Basics About Her
Oh sister
What's wrong with your mind?
You used to be so strong and stable

Name || Cinder
Nicknames || Cin, Cind, Spider, Cinders
Species || Grey Wolf
Age || 4 Years
Gender || Female
Rank || Gladiator

What She Looks Like
My sister
What made you fall from grace?
I'm sorry that I was not there to catch you

Coat || Her pelt is short and soft. The softness of her fur is something that isn’t usually common judging by the fact of how many fights they will get into but Cinder has managed to keep her pelt soft with a borderline obsessive amount of cleaning.
Fur Color || Cinder’s pelt is jet black and it holds no markings that would break up the colour as many other wolves do.
Eye Color || Her eyes are a brilliantly bright green. Though she hardly ever looks anyone in the eyes and her gaze is usually more directed towards the ground.
Scars || She has a set of three scars that run down her flank. There is also a single scar that runs vertically along her neck. Both of those scars were given to her by other wolves. She does happen to have self-inflicted scars that cover her front paws. These come from a nervous habit of chewing the tops of her paws until they start to bleed then doing it all over again once they heal.
Build || The female wolf has a relatively small build. Her legs are fairly short and that coupled with a slender build makes her appear to be very small in general. Nothing about the wolf makes her appear to be intimidating though she tries her best to intimidate others anyways. Even with the small stature though she is lean and a well-muscled wolf so still not someone to be messed with.
Reference Sheet || I need to do stuff
Overall || Cinder is a small wolf with a black pelt and bright green eyes. She has a few scars that define her but she doesn’t carry a very intimidating appearance.

The Story Of How She Came To Be
What have the demons done?
With the luminous light that once shined from your eyes

History || Start Of A Life | Leaving Home | Finding Friends | Making A Life | Out On Their Own | Love Lost | Another Home Gone | Starting Over
Start Of A Life: Like most pups Cinder was born into a family of six. She had her mother and father two brothers and a sister. Though there was something different about the black wolf. She was born small. So much smaller than her siblings that she would be referred to as a runt by humans. It wasn't long after the small pup was born that her parents would grow to resent her. A runt pup isn't very useful anyways but the fact that her one and only sister had stopped breathing shortly after birth made them resent her more. The two new parents named all four of their pups despite the fact that one hadn't lived long. They decided to name their three toned son the pup who resembled her father the most Nuka. From the beginning Nuka had shown promising signs to become an excellent hunter when he grew up. They decided on the name Luka for her other brother. He like Nuka had a three toned pelt but more resembled their mother than father. Then they had moved on to name the dead pup who hadn't managed to make it long in the harsh world. Her name would have been Lilly. The name came from the brilliant white colour of her pelt only blemished with light streaks of silver. The black wolf that showed very little resemblance of either of her parents but more of their parents was named Cinder. They picked that name because of the complete blackness of her pelt. Growing up Cinder was always aware of the size difference between her and her two brothers and they would never let her forget it. As they started training so that one day they would be able to leave and make families of their own it grew apparent that her parents didn't expect much out of the small pup. While Nuka would be taken out and taught hunting techniques and Luka would be taken on runs and taught the best scouting techniques Cinder would be pushed out into the woods and then wait as one of her brothers came to find her. It was usually Nuka seeing as he would usually cheat by following her out then pouncing on her to practice hunting techniques. Many of these attacks left Cinder bloody and exhausted. Considering how much faster her brothers were growing than her it was no contest of who would win in a fight. After many fights with her brothers and multiple gashes taken to the nose at a young age Cinder found that her sense of smell was starting to fade. It was when she realized that there was an entire other world out of her home with other wolves that she decided to leave.
Leaving Home: Despite her inability to hunt for prey due to not being trained and her lack of a sense of smell Cinder left her home behind. She snuck out during the night and found herself running through woods that she had never seen before. It was a new adventure for a young wolf. She wandered all through the night and didn’t realize it but by dawn break she had managed to wander into a packs territory. The small wolf was only notified that she had made her way into their territory when another wolf around the same age as her though the other wolf was easily bigger than her. Jumped out of a tree and landed on top of her. Cinder didn’t know it yet but this would be a wolf that she grew to be very fond of. Though at the moment she was terrified that someone had just dropped out of the trees and landed on top of her. For a moment she thought that her brother had followed her. Then she realized this wolf wasn’t like her brothers at all because upon realizing that Cinder isn’t a threat the stranger got off of her. The silver-blue wolf introduced herself as Tamber. Reluctantly the other young wolf took the dark pelted female to her Alpha. Upon meeting the alpha female Cinder introduced herself and how she had come across the packs territory. The older wolf was not impressed with the request to join her pack. “You are halfway through being an apprentice yet you remain the size of a large pup!” She had scoffed towards Cinder. “You don’t even have any training. You are useless.” The words had stung but it was nothing like what would come next. Now there is something you need to know about this Alpha female. She doesn’t just reject wolves but to make sure they don’t come back and steal her prey she makes sure that they can’t. Cinder hadn’t even seen the blow coming. It took only a second for the large wolf’s claws to rake down her neck. It happened so fast that she didn’t have time to react or strike back for she was on the ground with a heavily bleeding wound. This was when the same apprentice that had brought her to the pack stepped in. The guilt that would take hold in her bones if the small black wolf had died because she brought her here would destroy her. So instead of standing by she moved between her alpha a wolf that she loved and trusted and the crumpled figure on the ground a wolf who she knew nothing about. The alpha not wanting to hurt her prized apprentice gave Tamber an option. The blue-eyed wolf could either. Get out of the alpha’s way and stay in the pack or she could take Cinder’s side and be banished from the pack. In a somewhat stupid move she took the black wolves side. The Alpha hadn’t been impressed with the decision but decided against arguing with her. The older wolf had a few scouts drag Cinder out to the territory border as one last kindness towards Tamber. Though she warned if the silver wolf ever showed her face to the pack again the pack would show no remorse. With that they had left the two apprentices at the edge of the territory. The silver wolf took to cleaning and treating the wound on the green eyed wolf’s neck. They rested for a few days with the larger one of the two going out on hunting trips and bringing back an assortment of rabbits with the occasional bird. After the wound on Cinder’s neck had healed they started their journey out in search for a pack to take them in. They had come across a few packs with the advantage of Tamber’s tracking ability. The alpha’s had always seemed much more willing to take in the silver apprentice who showed much promise as a hunter than the black pelted one who didn’t show much promise of really anything. During this time Tamber caught food for the both of them while Cinder worked on her fighting abilities. It was helpful that every so often a stray wolf would come and try to take the food that they had caught. Thus giving her a chance to practice fighting with someone she didn’t mind hurting. One day while trying to join a pack their luck changed.
Finding Friends: WIP
Making a Life: WIP
Out On Their Own: WIP
Love Lost WIP
Another Home Gone WIP
Starting Over: WIP
Word Count || Start Of A Life-456 | Leaving Home-742 | Finding Friends-0 | Making A Life-0 | Out On Their Own-0 | Love Lost-0 | Another Home Gone-0 | Starting Over-0 | Total-1,221 (So Far)
Main Points || Start Of A Life | Leaving Home | Finding Friends | Making A Life | Out On Their Own | Love Lost | Another Home Gone | Starting Over
Start Of A Life: Born | Brothers Abuse | Losing Sense Of Smell | Starting To Mold Her Personality
Leaving Home: Leaving Her Parents | Gaining Her Neck Scar | Meeting Rogue
Finding Friends: Joining A New Pack | Winning Her First Fight | Meeting Chaos | Getting Training
Making a Life: Becoming Comfortable In Her Pack | Trusting More | Enjoying Her Life
Out On Their Own: Leaving With Rogue | Secretly Keeping In Contact With Chaos | Making Her Own Pack | Meeting Red
Love Lost: Realizes Feelings For Chaos | Chaos Goes Crazy | First Time Killing Another Wolf
Another Home Gone: Home Isn’t Home Anymore | Leaving Rogue Behind
Starting Over: Joining Sinister Chaos | Trying To Fit In | Dealing With Her Demons

What She Acts Like
What makes you feel so alone?
Is it the whispering ghosts
That you feared the most

Personality || Towards Strangers | Towards Friends | Towards Superiors
Towards Strangers: She is generally fairly aggressive towards wolves who she doesn’t know and will rarely ever grant them a chance to get to know her. Cinder doesn’t like to be around wolves who she doesn’t know and will usually try to avoid talking with them. If a wolf who she isn’t familiar with is to approach her she will most likely become reserved and not say much. Though if the opportunity presents itself she might play along with however another wolf is acting to simply try and manipulate them.
Towards Friends: Her behavior towards wolves who she considers to be friends is drastically different than towards strangers. Around her friends she will usually be more laid back and less aggressive. She becomes very protective of everyone she considers to be a friend. If there is ever a threat her first thoughts are usually going towards making sure that her friends are safe. Despite these wolves being friends she might still display some aggression should they stumble onto a sore topic with her.
Towards Superiors: The way Cinder acts around her superiors is completely different than the way she acts around anyone else. It is rare that she would ever show aggression towards a superior and she doesn’t often say much around them. Usually she will go off of the premise ‘Speak only when spoken to’. Even if she doesn’t have a particular amount of respect for a superior she will not question their judgment.
Weaknesses || Being social | Tracking
Strengths || Fighting | Tactical Analysis
Talents || Fighting Wolves Who Are Larger Than Her
Habits || Chewing Her Paws | Picking Fights

Her Relationships
But the blackness in your heart
Won't last forever

Current Friends || None - Maybe Someone Will Make It Onto Her Good Side
Past Friends || Rogue-Unknown
Acquaintances || Red - Unknown | Robin - Alive | Safia - Alive
Current Enemies || Jefferson - Alive
Past Enemies || Nuka-Unknown
Current Crush || None - Unlikely
Past Crush || Chaos-Deceased
Mate || None - Yeaaaah Riiiiiight
Pups || None - You Don't Want Her To Have Pups. Trust Me
Mother || Jasmine-Unknown
Father || Morton-Unknown
Brothers || Nuka-Assumed Alive | Luka-Unknown
Sister || Lilly-Deceased

Her Fallen
I know it's tearing you apart
But it's a storm you can weather

Name || Elijah
Why He Was Assigned To Her || He failed to keep the one who she loved the most safe and is now charged with being her shadow.
Personality || He resents his position as a fallen. Saying that what happened was not his fault that there was nothing he could have done to stop what happened.

Her Abilites
Oh sister
Those lines etched in your hands
They're hardened and rough like a road map of sorrow

Element || Fire
Triggered By || Stage 1 | Stage 2 | Stage 3
Stage 1: Slight annoyance | Stress
Stage 2: Persistant Annoyance | High Stress | Warning Someone Off
Stage 3: Full Out Fight
Stages Of Her Powers || No Trigger | Stage 1 | Stage 2 | Stage 3
No Trigger: Her powers remain dormant. Having no effect on her and simply causing her to appear as a normal wolf. With the exception of a slightly raised body temperature.
Stage 1: Her paws become hot, leaving burn marks on the ground where she walks.
Stage 2: The heat travels up her front legs, small flames sparking to life on her shoulders.
Stage 3: Her powers in full affect. Moderately sized flames stem out from her shoulders and down her spine.

Trivia About Her
My sister
There is a sadness on your face
You're like a motherless child who's longing for comfort

Dreams || Finding somewhere she truly considers home
Fears || This place not being her real home
Secrets || She killed the only wolf she ever loved
Theme Songs || High Road–Three Days Grace | You Threw The Stone-Projected Twin | Rusted From The Rain-Billy Talent
Stats || Just A bunch of stats.
★★★★★☆☆☆☆☆ - Strength
★★★★★★★☆☆☆ - Attack
★★★★☆☆☆☆☆☆ - Endurance
★☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ - Hunting
★★★★☆☆☆☆☆☆ - Speed
★★★★★★★★☆☆ - Defense
★★★★★★★★★☆ - Tactics
★★★☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ - Swimming
★★☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ - Jumping
★★★☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ - Climbing
★★★★★★★☆☆☆ - Stealth
★★★★☆☆☆☆☆☆ - Leadership Skills
★★★★☆☆☆☆☆☆ - Herbal Knowledge

Extra Notes
What's running through your veins?
That's causing you such pain?

Songs Quoted || Oh Sister - City And Colour
Activity Level || High - 9
Role-Play Level || Intermediate
Notes || It’s Cinder! Wooo~ I need to finish her history still aggggh.
How I Found You || I’m special that’s how

Last edited by Cinder on Sun Jun 15, 2014 3:28 am; edited 38 times in total

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Wed Sep 04, 2013 6:37 pm

Cinder...this is crazy amazing...great bio. i'm in love...must steal it! xD

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Wed Sep 04, 2013 6:58 pm

Thank you~ Just wait until I get my table working then it will be even better!

Guest

Accepted. Very nicely done Cind!

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Wed Sep 04, 2013 11:42 pm

Thanks! I have a ton of stuff I am still yet to add.

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Thu Sep 05, 2013 8:04 am

You are going to add more to it?! You just bring it, Cinder. I could never write one up this good.

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Thu Sep 05, 2013 9:15 am

Cin its amazing :o

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Thu Sep 05, 2013 12:43 pm

Gnaw thank you guys! Yeah Minty I still have like 5 chapters to add to her history. A bunch of little sprite type things to draw and put it all on a table the code the crud out of it~

Great Bard Posts : 98 Join date : 2013-09-03 Age : 29

Your biography is amazing, Cin! I love it and all the detail you've put into it. <33

I hope Cinder and Alice will be able to get along! =]

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Thu Sep 05, 2013 6:14 pm

We will have to introduce them and see how it goes! I would love for Cin to meet a ton of people~

Also thank you I really appreciate it

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Mon Sep 09, 2013 3:07 pm

Welcome

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Thu Sep 19, 2013 7:33 pm

Updated a couple things~

Posts : 51 Join date : 2013-09-10

Wow this is amqzing!! :) I would love it if Rue could meet Cinder sometime, it be interesting. What with her size and awkwardness with others, it be fun to write :)

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Thu Sep 19, 2013 8:33 pm

We will have to arrange them meeting some day!

Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-09-05 Age : 32

I'd seriously love to get her to meet Aj. He's even worse then Gravity lol |D

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Fri Sep 20, 2013 12:12 am

Well then. That will be very interesting!

Subject: Re: Cinder The Scarred Sun Jun 15, 2014 12:07 am

Added in a couple things, changed around a couple things. Going to be updating more as I go along.

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